The use of Swearwords
Walt: Writing a Personal Persuasive Essay
The usage of swear words in schools is annoying. The amounts of students who use swear words are growing rapidly. Swear words hurt people’s feelings, it’s inappropriate, and it sets a bad example. Using swear word is inappropriate. Swear words contain bad meanings. They can be used as an insult. Third they can become a raises comment.
Swear words set examples to little kids. It passes on because older kids who use it, then the little kids use swear word. So it passes on threw the smaller kids. Little kids think that swear words are cool so they pass it on.
Adults and students at school should try to stop using swear words. It spreads around and little kids think it’s cool. It hurts other people’s feelings. What if it happened to you would you try to stop it? To summarize I want to stop the spreading of swear words through little kids.
Definitely, a big improvement from one draft to the next. You need to work really hard on using more advanced sentence constructions and more cmplicated vocabulary words.
ReplyDeleteScott, I would like you to clearly monitor your learning on your weekly blog post. What have you done in persuasive writing? What reading skills did you practice this week? Please be more thoughtful when completing your blog posts.