Walt: writing an expository essay
By Scott Peregoodoff Date: 10/21/20
Ice hockey an enjoyable sport watched all around the world. There are many reasons people watch ice Hockey. One reason is because of the action. Some people come for the fights caused by aggression. Other people come for the goals scored by the best of players. Ice hockey has a lot of trick plays such as spearing and tripping, but there are still rules in the league.
Scott,
ReplyDeleteYou're talking about a sport and then, all of a sudden you're talking about a league.
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Great job though!
I know good point george but strong words and it is not long.
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